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色城第三届文心雕龙人妻征文大赛——评分专用贴

评委：xllc789
评分：8.5分

评论：我可以说，如果把楼主的文章写成电影剧本的话绝对可以拍成一部好看的A片。
时空的转换，角色的变化非常吸引人。有多P淫乱的场景；有幻想母亲的声色偷情。同时，
感觉到主人公的些许自卑。尤其是在窥视自己妻子被奸淫的场景描写非常到位。既然题目是
《重反子宫》是否把母亲的描写当作重点更贴近主题一些呢？
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